Forward

After seven months of thinking, writing, and rewriting it is finally here (don‘t get your hopes up). That is right, here is the rough draft of the rough draft of the first section of the first chapter of The Condition. Upon looking at it again tonight I suddenly realized that I forgotten why I had Aver say “ They always do” in the sixth paragraph but I have left it in just in case I remember later. A quick note about the end, I tried very hard to create a normal cliffhanger at the of the section but failed due to my obsession with tactics. Thus I created a tactical cliffhanger which will bore most of you and thrill very few (I couldn‘t help it, just writing this ending gave me goose bumps). If you can see any problems or can guess the plot leave a comment. One last note, things may change on this section over time. I would also like to say that I am not writing because my friends are. I started long before I knew about James's and I came up with the plot long before I learned of Derek's. One must do something when sitting in a tractor for hours on end.